To impress someone or to get there attention is not a simple thing to do. In my writing I always try to make it interesting and too captivate the reader. Using swimming as my extracurricular activity it may not be easy to make people interested in pure swimming. That is why I think putting in the lesson I learned or a idea I want to pass through. Mentioning more personal anecdotes with a meaning full out come is the one thing that catches people's attention.
From swimming I learned of the result of hard work and how being a hard working person always pays off. There have been times when I wanted to quit swimming and to just get lazy. However I pushed on and realized that the amount of work equals to the amount of outcome. I wasn't a hard working person and I think learning from swimming changed me as a person. I became a much more hardworking person and changes in my grades and work have changed as well
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